Friday, March 23, 2007

...written yesterday ..posting today ..

Today after many days...i saw the evening turning into the night..
The sunset and the twilight…

Today after many days..i saw pleasant weather..
I saw people on the roads… where I was lonely all this while..

Today after many days .. I saw some flowers blossoming too …
Whereas in past I had seen them getting dry..

Today after many days ..i saw life..
The grass has become green …which was dead all this while

Today after many days …I saw birds, a squirrel and a cat
They all had come to play their act...to add on to the charm ..

Today after many days….I could feel the warmth and I was filled with joy from within…
You opened the gates to the eternal happiness
How thankful and grateful I am to you, who showed me the beauty of life !

can it be called a poem or is this still a scribbling by wandering soul ....

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well written. Replace todays with today in the 5th line.

wandering soul said...

Replaced :) thanks for pointing it out!